TurtleBox420's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lux]

A little repetitive for a dance track but certainly not bad. Has a lot of signs of potential. Would love to see you upload more.

[Embrace The Chaos]

Not bad, would love to see longer work from you.

FSDiverserealm responds:

Wow. Thanks!

[Enigmatic Spanish Armada Empanada]

This holds the same critisims as with your other uploads, it's seemingly barren of creative flow and just comes across as you clicking notes in a sequencer and not really exploring composition.

There's nothing human about these tracks, and using the producer tag here implies you're producing music, not just generatively uploading here expecting to be Scouted while excusing critisims with "I respect your opinion, but no."

WongBeatz responds:

Well you can craft these theories all you want, but it each of our words against each other. I can talk, and breathe. Just to state, AI, can make more human music than other musicians. Sorry, I apologize you got rubbed the way. But to put simply, you are objectively wrong. I post not to be scouted, you can't make the assumption, I post because this something I like and I'd to share. This site is fun, and this is a nice hobby. I do suggest you shouldn't bold claims with no reasonable nor actionable basis.

[PKMN - Lake Theme (Remix)]

Solid remix, I would just really explore compressing near the end so it's not super loud stabs drowning everything else out.

Nylrix responds:

thx!! :)

[Jafar's Bananza]

This sounds way to sequenced and MIDI heavy and not really like an actual human produced track.

I would try to create tracks yourself, like actually get in there and play keys and not just press buttons and click notes in your sequence.

WongBeatz responds:

While I respect your opinion, I do try and implement theory into my pieces. These aren't meant to be fleshed out things but just a fun casual time. The tracks are made by me, the chords, bassline, drums. Anyways, I do hope you have more reasonable standards for other musicians in the near future, music is a spectrum after all :)

[itzfakerphonk1]

I would try breaking the track into some more sections. It seems like the same mid section looped over and over again between and intro and outro.

itzfaker responds:

thanks