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Really solid mixing here. Progression seems like a slow incline but I like that, very intentional and flourishes when it deserves to. Really great work. I think the legnth of tracks like this tend to give people listening to it a different perspective than those looking to give feedback, and as a listener I enjoyed it. As someone looking to give feedback I think the track also works, it's got a beginning, middle, end, an outro, nice buildups, and most importantly the mixing in the third act doesn't degrade for the sake of including the break drums. It;s a nice track, really solid.
This is exactly the kind of experimental stuff I wish blew up more on NewGrounds. Really solid work.
I agree with other reviews discussing the mixing needing improvement, but otherwise as raw as this is it's quite good.
Always awesome to see people listing what they've learned and how the track developed over time.
I think one piece of advice I could give with this is using compression to fix some of the crunch in the mix. A lot of the low and high end have some clipping occuring, noticeable at higher volumes but not anything that's ruining the track.
Your use of the reverse verb is fantastic, as is the sampling.
Fantastic job.
I disagree with the comment about the drums and repetitive nature. I think music being "repetitive" is a subjective thing. It comes down to things like genre, preference, intention, ect. On top of that, I think the drums fit nicely in the mix.
Pretty fun track, I really like the approach here.
Sounds really nice, eerie yet tame. Nice work.
Really cool work, can't wait to hear more from you.
Thanks for comment!
I love the pop energy of this, the kicks and synth go so well together.
Thank you very much. I wanted to make the music for the first level exciting.
Love it.
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