Probably one of the more original house tracks from the RvR thread. No random breakcore shoved in, just a really consistent beat and strong melodies. The mixing here is also really really good, probably could use a lot of work but it's clear you took some time with the mixing and equalizing.
There's so much happening in this track over the span of nearly five minutes, but in a sort of operatic sense. Very nice.
I think it's really lacking structure but if that's what you're going for than you nailed it. The kicks really turned me off from this but I infamously don't like breakcore and I guess I don't like Flashcore either.
Either way this is good work.
Thank you for listen the track, even if you didn't like it, is not breakcore, is Flashcore (speedcore variant).
I always try to improve and offer something that listeners like while working with the genres that I love. I hope to have a better opportunity in the future from your part. Thanks again.
I don't understand why this is tagged as heavy metal, it's some sort of gritty analog synth simulation, right?
I wouldn't try so hard to define a genre and just focus on finding where your heart takes you compositionally and go from there. Make what makes your body feel good and don't worry about genres or anything whne you bring them here.
I think the track is okay though, it's pretty different than most of what's posted here.
The thing is that the site required me to specify the genre. i have no idea what type of genre this song is i was making whatever sounded nice to me
I like everything except the beat, I would try to really pull back next time, either by spreading them with a really tight reverb or just splitting them up in the mix and panning it out.
Once again happy to hear something unique and thoughtful without there just being some super compressed Breakcore beat punching through.
tyty i love weird shit!!! :D
I skipped around to try to get a taste of every track, it was some nice listening. Some of the tracks felt a little more compressed than others, and if I had to give one piece of feedback it's that the beats seem to repeat and not change much throughout individual tracks.
Really catchy and fun. Soft listening, I think what's worth mentioning here though is how damn well you layered everything. How it comes out at 2 minutes and comes back in around 2:12 is so smooth.
You have a lot of talent and should be proud of this. I only gave four stars cause I think it could be a littttttle tiny bit panned better but It's super hard to tell without listening to how your panning is in your other work.
Thanks! Yeah, this song was finished for a while, but what took me so long to get it ready for publishing was making sure the song was layered and mixed correctly! Yeah, I'm sure I could pan it better in future songs. I'm still a bit new to panning, so I don't use it a lot in my songs. But it's something I'm definitely going to expand on!
You have a lot of really strong points in here but I think the mixing needs some work, there's some peaking in some places that could be touched up pretty easily with some gating. Otherwise I like it, the vocals are really strong, I would heavily encourage you to really work on those and make them your selling point.
Post more, NG needs more live bands.
Well, that made my day! I'll post more from the (upcoming) new album!
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