TurtleBox420's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Enigmatic Spanish Armada Empanada]

This holds the same critisims as with your other uploads, it's seemingly barren of creative flow and just comes across as you clicking notes in a sequencer and not really exploring composition.

There's nothing human about these tracks, and using the producer tag here implies you're producing music, not just generatively uploading here expecting to be Scouted while excusing critisims with "I respect your opinion, but no."

WongBeatz responds:

Well you can craft these theories all you want, but it each of our words against each other. I can talk, and breathe. Just to state, AI, can make more human music than other musicians. Sorry, I apologize you got rubbed the way. But to put simply, you are objectively wrong. I post not to be scouted, you can't make the assumption, I post because this something I like and I'd to share. This site is fun, and this is a nice hobby. I do suggest you shouldn't bold claims with no reasonable nor actionable basis.

[PKMN - Lake Theme (Remix)]

Solid remix, I would just really explore compressing near the end so it's not super loud stabs drowning everything else out.

Nylrix responds:

thx!! :)

[Jafar's Bananza]

This sounds way to sequenced and MIDI heavy and not really like an actual human produced track.

I would try to create tracks yourself, like actually get in there and play keys and not just press buttons and click notes in your sequence.

WongBeatz responds:

While I respect your opinion, I do try and implement theory into my pieces. These aren't meant to be fleshed out things but just a fun casual time. The tracks are made by me, the chords, bassline, drums. Anyways, I do hope you have more reasonable standards for other musicians in the near future, music is a spectrum after all :)

[itzfakerphonk1]

I would try breaking the track into some more sections. It seems like the same mid section looped over and over again between and intro and outro.

itzfaker responds:

thanks

[CB - Graviton Fields]

Some details about the production would be appreciated for review purposes. Otherwise this sounds pretty nice.

Citrobyte responds:

Thanks

[Harry Kirkhope]

Not bad at all, pretty fun track as well.

ChaosHarry13 responds:

Thanks man :)

[Forgotten Paradise]

I'm legit happy to see you always improving and releasing strong content.

CatDestroyer04 responds:

Thank you! most of my tracks are past releases, so feel free to hear them when you have time! of course i'm working on new content that will be released in the future!

[Waiting room of 3035]

I would try some more listenable harmonies and explore your EQ a lot, especially in the middle to low end.

Best of luck improving!

Hypersleeper responds:

Thanks, i'll keep that in mind. I didn't know what EQ was lol.

[Cat Destroyer & Lunulata - Journey To A Unknown Star]

I like this a lot, especially around the 3:30 mark and onward. I do however think it needs just a teeny tiny bit more low end in some places, maybe widen the panning just a bit or add a tonal pad under everything.

But I do enjoy your work, this is another great piece from you.

CatDestroyer04 responds:

Thank you, i will try my best for improve on future tracks and collabs!

[homestuck]

Out of all your tracks, what you have here is the best to offer. I would take a walk through how you composed this, what was going through your mind and the steps you took to fine tune it and apply that to all of your work going forward.

I believe you have a LOT of potential.

a3iLhadanalt responds:

thank you so much! i can't say because i normally keep things a secret. but, i do enjoy making things for fun!