TurtleBox420's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Broken Limit]

The transition and key change kind of just really comes out of nowhere. While keychanges and great, this track sort of just feels a little artifical in the sense that it doesn't know what mood or tone it wants to have, it just sort of what's to be a track.

While I don't think it's AI, it certainly has a lot of questionable songwriting choices.

z8ny responds:

I was trying to make something different than most songs, and I don't know if I did it did well. I admit that I don't really take my time while creating music, and I agree that the transition is out of place. Also, there is no key change, the song stays in G♯ minor the entire time.

[Listen To The Void]

Isn't this a Tiktok Audio?

ImNotIsra responds:

I don't know, I don't remember uploading my song to tiktok

[World After Destruction]

No Comments, just stars.

CatDestroyer04 responds:

The entire EP has been one of my biggest efforts to date. Thank you, i'm very glad that you liked it.

[Enigmatic Spanish Armada Empanada]

This holds the same critisims as with your other uploads, it's seemingly barren of creative flow and just comes across as you clicking notes in a sequencer and not really exploring composition.

There's nothing human about these tracks, and using the producer tag here implies you're producing music, not just generatively uploading here expecting to be Scouted while excusing critisims with "I respect your opinion, but no."

WongBeatz responds:

Well you can craft these theories all you want, but it each of our words against each other. I can talk, and breathe. Just to state, AI, can make more human music than other musicians. Sorry, I apologize you got rubbed the way. But to put simply, you are objectively wrong. I post not to be scouted, you can't make the assumption, I post because this something I like and I'd to share. This site is fun, and this is a nice hobby. I do suggest you shouldn't bold claims with no reasonable nor actionable basis.

[PKMN - Lake Theme (Remix)]

Solid remix, I would just really explore compressing near the end so it's not super loud stabs drowning everything else out.

Nylrix responds:

thx!! :)

[Jafar's Bananza]

This sounds way to sequenced and MIDI heavy and not really like an actual human produced track.

I would try to create tracks yourself, like actually get in there and play keys and not just press buttons and click notes in your sequence.

WongBeatz responds:

While I respect your opinion, I do try and implement theory into my pieces. These aren't meant to be fleshed out things but just a fun casual time. The tracks are made by me, the chords, bassline, drums. Anyways, I do hope you have more reasonable standards for other musicians in the near future, music is a spectrum after all :)

[itzfakerphonk1]

I would try breaking the track into some more sections. It seems like the same mid section looped over and over again between and intro and outro.

itzfaker responds:

thanks

[CB - Graviton Fields]

Some details about the production would be appreciated for review purposes. Otherwise this sounds pretty nice.

Citrobyte responds:

Thanks

[Harry Kirkhope]

Not bad at all, pretty fun track as well.

ChaosHarry13 responds:

Thanks man :)