TurtleBox420's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jafar's Bananza]

This sounds way to sequenced and MIDI heavy and not really like an actual human produced track.

I would try to create tracks yourself, like actually get in there and play keys and not just press buttons and click notes in your sequence.

WongBeatz responds:

While I respect your opinion, I do try and implement theory into my pieces. These aren't meant to be fleshed out things but just a fun casual time. The tracks are made by me, the chords, bassline, drums. Anyways, I do hope you have more reasonable standards for other musicians in the near future, music is a spectrum after all :)

[itzfakerphonk1]

I would try breaking the track into some more sections. It seems like the same mid section looped over and over again between and intro and outro.

itzfaker responds:

thanks

[CB - Graviton Fields]

Some details about the production would be appreciated for review purposes. Otherwise this sounds pretty nice.

Citrobyte responds:

Thanks

[Harry Kirkhope]

Not bad at all, pretty fun track as well.

ChaosHarry13 responds:

Thanks man :)

[Anywhere but the Present]

THe lack of panning and everything in the mix being the same frequency wise makes this a little uncomfortable to listen to, but it's not really bad. Just shows you have potential but a lot to work on.

Immortal-Pizza responds:

Yeah I also thought this is one of the worse songs I've made, will definitely try to improve things next time. Thank you so much for the feedback!

[Forgotten Paradise]

I'm legit happy to see you always improving and releasing strong content.

CatDestroyer04 responds:

Thank you! most of my tracks are past releases, so feel free to hear them when you have time! of course i'm working on new content that will be released in the future!

[Waiting room of 3035]

I would try some more listenable harmonies and explore your EQ a lot, especially in the middle to low end.

Best of luck improving!

Hypersleeper responds:

Thanks, i'll keep that in mind. I didn't know what EQ was lol.

[Cat Destroyer & Lunulata - Journey To A Unknown Star]

I like this a lot, especially around the 3:30 mark and onward. I do however think it needs just a teeny tiny bit more low end in some places, maybe widen the panning just a bit or add a tonal pad under everything.

But I do enjoy your work, this is another great piece from you.

CatDestroyer04 responds:

Thank you, i will try my best for improve on future tracks and collabs!

[homestuck]

Out of all your tracks, what you have here is the best to offer. I would take a walk through how you composed this, what was going through your mind and the steps you took to fine tune it and apply that to all of your work going forward.

I believe you have a LOT of potential.

a3iLhadanalt responds:

thank you so much! i can't say because i normally keep things a secret. but, i do enjoy making things for fun!

[what is indigo park]

This is really good, I'd love to see you potentially explore mixing more, and see you add some notes to your descriptions about where your focus is when composing the tracks and during your workflow.

a3iLhadanalt responds:

i make random descriptions from time to time, so it's not really that much of an issue. thank you for listening!