TurtleBox420's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dark carnival]

I absolutely love the use of soundfonts here.

Some advice I would give is to really really work on finding a way to help your dynamics breath. Regardless of it's through panning, mixing, or comrpessing the instruments individually.

This is an outstanding track sort of held back by a bit of issues after composition.

Please keep uploading, I would love to see more from you.

Cipower3 responds:

Thank you so much!! Also could you tell me some more specific ways I can improve the dynamics? Right now Im working on another track thats way more complex than this one, and I want it to be the best it can be. So if you could show me it would be awesome!

[TASTY BEATZ]

Not bad but could really use some work.

SunnyGuyShine responds:

i know lmao i just started making music and stuff

[Biffed It]

Pretty solid track here. Really love the choice of synths, very Analog and attractive.

conundrym responds:

duly noted, thanks for the reply!

[Broken Limit]

The transition and key change kind of just really comes out of nowhere. While keychanges and great, this track sort of just feels a little artifical in the sense that it doesn't know what mood or tone it wants to have, it just sort of what's to be a track.

While I don't think it's AI, it certainly has a lot of questionable songwriting choices.

z8ny responds:

I was trying to make something different than most songs, and I don't know if I did it did well. I admit that I don't really take my time while creating music, and I agree that the transition is out of place. Also, there is no key change, the song stays in G♯ minor the entire time.

[Listen To The Void]

Isn't this a Tiktok Audio?

ImNotIsra responds:

I don't know, I don't remember uploading my song to tiktok

[World After Destruction]

No Comments, just stars.

CatDestroyer04 responds:

The entire EP has been one of my biggest efforts to date. Thank you, i'm very glad that you liked it.

[Embrace The Chaos]

Not bad, would love to see longer work from you.

FSDiverserealm responds:

Wow. Thanks!

[Enigmatic Spanish Armada Empanada]

This holds the same critisims as with your other uploads, it's seemingly barren of creative flow and just comes across as you clicking notes in a sequencer and not really exploring composition.

There's nothing human about these tracks, and using the producer tag here implies you're producing music, not just generatively uploading here expecting to be Scouted while excusing critisims with "I respect your opinion, but no."

WongBeatz responds:

Well you can craft these theories all you want, but it each of our words against each other. I can talk, and breathe. Just to state, AI, can make more human music than other musicians. Sorry, I apologize you got rubbed the way. But to put simply, you are objectively wrong. I post not to be scouted, you can't make the assumption, I post because this something I like and I'd to share. This site is fun, and this is a nice hobby. I do suggest you shouldn't bold claims with no reasonable nor actionable basis.

[PKMN - Lake Theme (Remix)]

Solid remix, I would just really explore compressing near the end so it's not super loud stabs drowning everything else out.

Nylrix responds:

thx!! :)